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A request made for ~stelina-kistune.
Theme: Waves, tides, ocean, water; A friend/crush leaves, then comes back and the feelings come rushing back.

Oh please, oh please, oh please tell me this is a decent poem! My brain is outta whack today. Hope this is satisfactory Stelina, if not i'll try again until it is!!! :D

Tell me what you think below and/or fave :) comments are always welcome!

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PandaJeter Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is good.
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realARTIZT Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you love!
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PandaJeter Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome. :tighthug:
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:iconstelina-kistune:
Thank you thank you thank you!!!! This is a more than decent poem and it is 1000% satisfactory! Its totally how I feels when we see each other and then not for a while! And if it hadnt been a request by me it would be awesome! I love how you really went with my water theme :D thanks a bunch again! maybe I'll read it everytime I see him to help me get past it to finally not let the tide take me away!

Again thank you sooooo much for taking the time to do my request :glomp:
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realARTIZT Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol what's funny to me is the fact that i'd normally be doing cartwheels right now if I hadn't been typing all day- right now im tired but really just elated that you like it :) you're so very welcome welcome welcome and i'm sending a million virtual hugs right now so i hope you can feel at least one :)
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:iconstelina-kistune:
The hugs were all received! And I'm happy that you're happy that I like it. If that makes sense :P Seriously though you capture perfectly what I feel 'cause we dont see each other a lot but whenever we do something together (this time it had been three years that we had not seen eachother)I feel so giddy its totally ridiculous! And believe me when I saw him he still had an effect on me, but then we don't see each other for a while and I seriously don't think about him really, it's not like I'm waiting for him but then we plan something and I'm just swept away again for a little while. So the tide and the waves and the beach of clarity (really liked that sentence even though I like all of it too)were all perfect representation of what I feel and you're just soooooo awesome for having got it perfectly like that!!!!!! :glomp: xinfinity!!!

(okay wow maybe I wrote a little too much this time? xD)
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