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A request made for *BloodyDeathDream.
Theme: Friendship

Took me a few hours to think it over, but I really hope it's to your liking!

Tell me what you think below and/or fave :) comments are always welcome!

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MissTsukii Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
what can i say?? you're so AMAZING! Your amazing to take a common topic and build a unique concept...you're amazing to use the friggin alphabet to pen words that makes me wonder..are you amazing or are you simply amazing??!! 
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realARTIZT Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Wow :blush: You're amazing!!!! Thank you so much for your comment! It was a shock to see and really it made my month :) :hug:
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MissTsukii Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oh!! that's so much to say!!! :iconmoeblushplz: I'm so glad!! I wanted to say much more...like how i'd try wroting like this...but oh....i cannot come up to your level!! This is the best Friendship song ever!!! 
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Artphul1 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Professional General Artist
Beautiful! Very well written! I love the way you expressed yourself in this work. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece with us, and thank you again for submitting it to the group #Artphul1derofthesoul!
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ChungKeePanda Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013
I really liked it. It flows and the theme is beautiful!
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realARTIZT Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
:happybounce: thank youuuu!!!!
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blue-eyed-bee Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013
this is such a cool poem. i once tried to find a word that could sum up someone very dear to me, and nothing could, so i decided i'd just create my own word to describe him. i ended up forgetting the word but not the feeling which inspired it.
so i guess i could say, i really relate to this poem.
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realARTIZT Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
It will be included into my new book :) wanna make a request?
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blue-eyed-bee Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013
a request? certainly!
okay, i always imagine an empty table with many chairs around it, not tucked in neatly - as if everyone has just left the table, and one man is sitting at the table, eagerly awaiting the presence of someone, but that person never shows up, never realises that this person loves them deeply and is waiting for them.

so if you could write something about this, make a theme around it, that would be cool.
is that the sort of request you're looking for? i can give you a different one if you like?
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realARTIZT Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
totally do-able! thanks for the request :) haven't had many good ones lately...

i'll note you when it's done, ok? just gimme some time to think it up. :D
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blue-eyed-bee Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
i'm glad it's a good request...
thanks :D
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Slipmaskin Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like the structure of this poem! One can tell that you've put great effort into it and so the result turns out great as well!
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realARTIZT Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you! I did! :) I'm glad someone appreciated it :D

Remember, if you ever want to request a poem- I'll take on the challenge!
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PandaJeter Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Deep is one word i would use to describe the awesomeness. I got goosbumps at the end.
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Bhabayagga Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student Writer
.......amazing. I barely got words to tell you how good it is after reading the whole thing.
Keep up the good work!

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realARTIZT Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
thank you!!!!! :hug:
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Bhabayagga Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student Writer
Oh, you're welcome! :)
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realARTIZT Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
:happybounce:
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mypuppetboresme Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012
you are truly insane. You have never been any of these things for me. you want to keep believing,keep holding on to this, but we are not frends. you dont have any,and either do I. good poem though
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realARTIZT Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
many question marks and many thanks puppet :)...:shrug:
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Sarvstergal Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wonderful Work!
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realARTIZT Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you so very much!!!!
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samiispecialz Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012
This is truely amazing xD... N that is a total understatement!
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realARTIZT Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
:blush: thanxness!!!
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samiispecialz Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
Welllllcccooommmeee^^*
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MissTsukii Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This so totally describes my friendship with my best friend. I miss her though... and this is amazing!
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realARTIZT Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
thank you for reading my poem! :happybounce:
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MissTsukii Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ah, it was my pleasure....
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realARTIZT Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
:)
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ilya101010 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012
Amazing song! Thank you for such wonderful thing!
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realARTIZT Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
:) thank you for taking the time to read it! :D
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stealthyninja21 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Student General Artist
its so good :) you're right,it's kinda hard to describe what friendship means in one word
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realARTIZT Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
thank you!!!!!! and i had to look into a thesaurus tbh lol no words came to mind!
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stelina-kistune Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
It's absolutely beautiful, friendship is so hard to describe but so dear to us! I love how you get that every bond of friendship is unique and that you develop differents ways of knowing a person and understanding her depending on who it is, each time is different. :+fav:
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realARTIZT Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
thank you stelina!!!!!!! and yes, as always, you are sooooo right :nod:
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stelina-kistune Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012
You're welcome! And I'm always right? I just write what I think after reading your poems, so I guess your poems are also right :nod:
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BloodyDeathDream Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
It's so awesome I cried a bit good job
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realARTIZT Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
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yayness!!!!! lol
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BloodyDeathDream Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Thank u for this beautiful poem
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